This week was the same as last week, as we continued to edit our sequence, album cover and website and then get feedback
Sequence: We finished our rough edit on Monday:
We the received feedback on our rough edit:
- The start is a bit loose, try to add more shots of Boyfriend and Candles
- Show progression of narrative more
- Pulpit shots don't seem to work at the start
- Some shots need to be closer, stay a long way out too often
- Change intro band shot, not so much black space
- Include more of the Olivia CU, especially on first verse
- Only show Olivia on the breakdown - don't have guitar close ups
We received feedback on our album cover:
- Add an effect to the back cover as it currently looks too dull
- Add an effect to the inside cover as it currently looks too dull
- Add white background to the behind disc cover, extend heightboard to the edge of the cover template
- Add barcode and institutional information on the back cover (We also inputted a QR code here)
We received feedback on our website:
- Check your links work, the banner to buy the single couldn't be clicked on
- Input a link to the record label's website
- Organise the gallery page properly, doesn't look like it is quite finished
- Input more visuals on the News, Gallery and Competition pages as there is too much white space on them at the moment.
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